Warrior Princess: The Vampi Kingdom
by @BeckyRuef
This book was very nice! I was immediately intrigued. There was good character development. The grammar was also pleasant. Congrats on keeping the entertaining aspects alive! The imagery and plot was all great. There are only a couple things I'd like to touch on. Sometimes, words would join together. Make sure when you're editing, you're doing so thoroughly. Also, you switched from present to past tense quite a bit. Make sure you just pick one. It's a common mistake, but keep it consistent. That's important, very important. Other than that, I enjoyed the read. Keep writing!
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