Youth Unsupervised
by @Aruko-Rukie
I must say, I'm surprised. This book turned out much better than I thought it would. Take that as you will. The grammar was great, and it was pleasant to have the paragraphs correctly structured. There was humor, and there was imagery. Though, sometimes I felt like the details were forced. It seemed a bit too robotic at times, especially in the beginning. I also feel that the characters weren't given enough background information. Other than that though, the book was a very nice read. Thank you for the request!
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RandomWhat you need to know: 1. Must be your own work obviously 2. Everything I say is constructive criticism. I will be honest. (Here's a secret: There's no such thing as a perfect story) 3. I'm open to fan fiction. It'll just take me a while to review...
