Something like gravity: Trustfall
by @thaparuku
Okay, this story had okay grammar and great humor. You've added nice elements to reading. Yet, it was rather boring. The book just lacked a few plot elements. I suppose it just matters in the type of reader. For instance, I read a book for a great story to tell with mood swings. Your book is just a light read. There's nothing wrong with that. I was just hoping for something a little...more. Sorry for the short one. There just wasn't much to talk of. Keep working hard on it. Interest the readers. Every word counts.
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RandomWhat you need to know: 1. Must be your own work obviously 2. Everything I say is constructive criticism. I will be honest. (Here's a secret: There's no such thing as a perfect story) 3. I'm open to fan fiction. It'll just take me a while to review...
