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Review 71: Collision

Collision
by @blexis368

Okayyy, so I always start my review by checking out the layout of the book. This means I check out if there would be a prologue, chapters, parts, notes, or epilogues. When I went to check, I was very...amused? The chapter names were very interesting. Anyway, I got into the review with a clear head. The beginning confused me. Try adding a transition or setting a time period. This won't get rid of the backstory's effect. It'll just make the reader think less—which, in this case, is a good thing. I learned quickly that this book would be very amusing. It was a fun read, though it had its moments when it needed it. The grammar was okay. Minor mistakes were all around. The reactions were pretty realistic though. Overall, I was impressed. Normally, people would get too immature in their ideas and would produce a book of nonsense. This one had a story though, and it was fun to read. Thank you for that. Now...that last bit. I know, I know... I wasn't supposed to read the last bit, but I thought I had to in order to really capture your story. It made me laugh. The thing is, I've gone through the same exact thing. I wrote my character self conscious for a chapter in my book once during writer's block. It does get better though, and it's a great way to keep your readers amused! Good job!