Harry Potter: Rise of the Spiral
by @manny0101
Reread
I gotta say: this book had some great grammar. Also, I truly appreciated the terminology put in before the book began. Though, I would recommend working these definitions into the story when the term is put in just to save the readers some page turning. Everything book-wise was magnificent. Then, I realized a similar story. To be honest, I'm a fan of Harry Potter. I read the books. That's why I didn't like reading through this. If I wanted a twisted play by play version of the series, I'd just use my imagination. That said, I'm not a fan of the other content's side. Perhaps this was a mashup of a lifetime. For me, it felt like I was reliving my Harry Potter days. That would be good for memory, but not for originality. Again, I'm nearly never a fan of fan fictions, so don't take this to heart.
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AlteleWhat you need to know: 1. Must be your own work obviously 2. Everything I say is constructive criticism. I will be honest. (Here's a secret: There's no such thing as a perfect story) 3. I'm open to fan fiction. It'll just take me a while to review...
