Origin
by @KatyBizi
Repetition
First and foremost, nice layout! On Wattpad, it's hard to find a book with proper formatting. Yours wasn't perfect, but it was very close! The book itself was decent. I was hooked, and I enjoyed its suspense. The plot moved quite smoothly. Characters' reactions were portrayed well, and it was nice to see foreshadowing. Overall, I'm quite impressed. One nitpick is the repetitive I's: "I do this. I do that." Try changing up the sentence structure. No two sentences should begin the same way unless it's for effects. Keep working hard. This story was great.
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RandomWhat you need to know: 1. Must be your own work obviously 2. Everything I say is constructive criticism. I will be honest. (Here's a secret: There's no such thing as a perfect story) 3. I'm open to fan fiction. It'll just take me a while to review...
