Dancing On Thin Ice
by @JBandJHope
Let's get into this. I'd like to say the good things first. When I first began reading the book, I loved all the imagery. The grammar also wasn't bad. Characters, too, were well-developed. The story itself had an interesting idea. Everything had great intentions, I could see. Still, maybe once a chapter did I find a short sentence. Long sentences are great, but you need some short ones in there to balance it out! Without this balance, the book gets boring. It was all too much. Other than that, I didn't find the story to be very realistic. I'm not talking about the events. I'm talking about the extent of reactions. At the same time, I'm not very interested in the group the book revolves around. From the many views, though, I can see many people enjoy this book. Please take my comments into consideration, but good work!
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