Abhaya Bhairavi
by @KaushikiGanguly
The start of this book was great! Throughout the story, there'd be moments where I'd get a little bored, but that's not a terrible thing. The imagery was amazing. You've touched all the 5 senses for me. Even, in the book, did I have to infer a few details about the character. That's great to me, as techniques like that are hard to find in Wattpad. The characters were all great and realistic. The only thing left to touch on are the grammatical errors. There aren't that many but the ones I could find stood out like a sore thumb. With all the views and awards from this book already, I'm sure you could get a professional to edit your book. I'm sure you could fix it yourself, but I know fresh eyes are always handy. Anyways, thank you for the read! It was lovely, and I do recommend it.
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