The Labyrinth
by @charlie_pozzi_777
This story was very intriguing! I loved every bit of it! The characters and plot were thought out. Your grammar was great. The imagery was amazing. I was very impressed with this read. The only thing that was a bit off were the flashbacks. I loved the idea of them all, but sometimes they seemed random. Just make sure the story flows together in every sentence and in every paragraph. Thank you so much for this read. I definitely recommend it.
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RandomWhat you need to know: 1. Must be your own work obviously 2. Everything I say is constructive criticism. I will be honest. (Here's a secret: There's no such thing as a perfect story) 3. I'm open to fan fiction. It'll just take me a while to review...
