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if you have read any of my previous works you know i'm abt to go on a long rant about feedback. basically, i am actively looking for feedback in everything i write. in this story, plz give any feedback whether it be good or bad. i want to self publish this story, like i did sacred ties, and i never would have been able to do that without yall's feedback.
feedback can be on
-ANY thoughts or opinions
-anything confusing that i should revisit / expand
-the pacing of the story
-clunky or good prose
-any scenes that don't fit or flow with the story
-characters not being true to themselves or inconsistent motivations
-repetition or confusing passages
-any unrealistic moments or cringe moments (karro said some things that made me barf)
-grammar and spelling
-what you like and what is unique
-plot holes (questions that need to be answered)
-also the format of this story is kinda confusing since its telling a story of the past and present while building a world; lmk at any points if it becomes too much:)
ANYTHING HELPS I LOVE U GUYS SO SO MUCH
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of blood and lies ; dystopian
Romancein which ex lovers and sworn enemies are trapped in a room together. [daily updates]
