Dumb/Cliché Fanfic Thing: Clumsiness
Oh my word. The author says the main girl's clumsy, but the only proof of that is when that's needed (ex. tripping and falling on Lover so they're nose to nose). Another thing about that: Lover's not crushed under her weight at all? Ehhhhhh no.
She's not clumsy. If you want to make her actually clumsy, put more proof in the story, not just when its needed.
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Dumb Fanfic Moments or Cliché Things
HumorMost fanfiction have at least one of these things that is so overused or dumb readers expect it. So, I've made a list of the ones I see a lot so hopefully you don't include these in your stories (although if you do include them I don't blame you)! ...
