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Chapter 59: An Unstable Blade

Author's Notes (15)

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School's back, and I'm dying already.

This first part's a bit depressing for Ash. And it's kinda my fault since... I watched the first episode of Oshi no Ko.

Now granted, I've already read the manga, but the anime hits different, man. What's more, it served as a reminder for me of Fated!Ash's own trauma, which I'll talk more in the latter half of the notes.

Now, review questions:

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Lord Hayman:

Noice chapter and i really love red and yellow being the nicknames for our amour couple since I'm also a speical shipper. i wonder would Ash's later traveling companion like dawn and may would get there adventures manga names as their nicknames
like sapphire and platinum.
Well about serena's intimidate skill is awesome
I thought serena will also compete in M16 as kalos champion as kalos champion like in Pokemon masters ex but i realised diantha is already in the M16 as kalos champion, i really wanted to see how serena will intimidate ash in battle I'm expecting ash vs Serena in future friendly match (hope our couple don't stare at eachother for too long and the serena intimidating skill will turn into intimate with ash and ash will turn into lover instead of faker with serena) i was re-reading ash vs Lorierl match
I just realised that Axe-Sword is Berserker's main weapon isn't it and the mawarok nine strikes is same as Shirou as Nine Lives Blade Works, which has Shirou can swing the sword nine times faster than the speed of sound right?(i watched fate in lock down but i forgot all most everything and also saber x shirou fan here here i call it Avalon shipping since they had a happy ending in Avalon in play station 2 game remake of fate)
And i was also re-reading gary vs ash but i couldn't help but nostalgia hit me lol it really fells like kai vs Brooklyn in Beyblade g revelation but in Pokemon lol like ash get burried in rocks and just like kai

But seriously do you have any reason why you gave ash nickname being red and serena's Being yellow in the story any reason XD but i seriously own you a apology lol for spamming 11 messages in pm i was new to ffs i refresh and the message doubled I'm sorry about that anyways,looking forward for ash and serena's reunion this is my favourite story of all time.

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First off, thanks for the lengthy review, really enjoyed reading it.

Adventures nicknames: Yeah, the manga names will make their appearances. Wouldn't make sense for only the Kanto trio plus Serena to have them, right?

M16 matchups: Truthfully speaking, I'm still wondering if I should put Serena in. The list ain't finalized, but I'll finish it... eventually.

Nine Lives: Yes! Finally, someone said it. Berserker's axe-sword and Nine Lives is referenced. However, Nine Lives as a move doesn't really make sense so I've changed it to Nine 'Strikes' instead since it's more fitting and similar. Axe-sword though... might make an appearance.

Avalon happy ending: That's the main premise of Fated's story, Ash searching and Serena waiting, until they reunite.

- (Not in Avalon though, that'll mean they're dead monkaS)

Beyblade reference: Gotta be honest, I've never watched Beyblade, but if there's already a dude who gets buried in rocks during a tournament; then, man, my ideas may be more cliche than I thought. Gotta step up mah game.

Red and Yellow: They are just nicknames that parallel Special and Amour (seriously, the straw hat is the glue that connects them). However, it's also a indication that there are no parents for Ash like in many fics where his dad is Red and Delia is actually Yellow, or something along those lines. It's to show how alone Ash really is by extinguishing any theories about his father since he's not in the fic.