The Beauty Within
arkiteknikowl
Teen Fiction
On-going
1. Book Cover - I love how your book cover emphasizes the MC's flaw, and it's really artistic for me so, I'll give you a perfect 10!
2. Title - I gotta be honest, your title really didn't get me, so I was just like meh when I saw the title. I didn't give too much admiration for your title, but the title suits the story so, GOOD JOB!
3. Grammar - like I said in your first story, I was really astonished by your grammar. I admit I'm a grammar freak myself but still sucks with it so, damn, gotta give you a good score. You still have few to learn thou, but, it isn't noticeable so... Thumbs up!
4. Contents - I really love how the character's thoughts were executed. I love how realistic it is that it makes your readers think that the story came from a person's true story. I'll give you a perfect score on this one!
5. Overall Impact - as I said, I'm actually loving your story! Your first story and this story! The overall impact, I must say, is a perfect score! Malayo mararating mo! Hehe...
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Book Cover: 10/10
Title: 15/20
Grammar: 33/35
Content: 25/25
Overall Impact: 10/10
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Total Score: 93/100
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