She's The Real Challenge
mr_cuddles
Romance
Completed
1. Book Cover - the pastel book cover is fine, but it's not that good for a romance book. Para kasing nagmukhang teen fiction or chick literature book instead of romance.
2. Title - the title is actually fine, it's somehow interesting as I can see (I can conclude, rather, based on the title) that it is a male POV. I hope the title can uphold my good expectations.
3. Grammar - very grammar-wise! Seriously, I like the realistic dialogues which is very grammar-wise! Thou I know you can still improve it.
4. Contents - the flow is good... I like how you emphasize the cliche-ness of the story which made it really attractive. Like, most authors want to be known for a unique story plot but here you are, risking the story bravely. I also like how you narrate... I also like how they're gonna use each other.
5. Overall Impact - it's cool, like really. Thou it's still kinda cliche, I don't know why but something is telling me that is kinda good.
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Book Cover : 07/10
Title : 17/20
Grammar : 33/35
Contents : 22/25
Overall Impact: 07/10
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Total Score : 86/100
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