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Mystery/Thriller
Completed
1. Book Cover - I don't really like book covers with a lot in it, I prefer simple covers (syempre ako nagkicritique so base talaga sa standards ko, hehe)... I believe in "Simplicity is Beauty" so... THUMBS UP!
2. Title - the title suits the story but it won't attract the crowd, don't change the title.
3. Grammar - the construction of grammar is okay, but use punctuations correctly...
4. Contents - I like the realness of the dialogues. Ang mga dialogues mo ay tila hinuha mo sa totoong mga sinasabi ng totoong mga tao! I can't construct real-life dialogues like that and make them appear like they are really true person... I also love how the flow is perfectly done! PERFECT SCORE!
5. Overall Impact - I love the whole story! I even read it TWICE! Y-E-S HEY! Hehe...
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Book Cover: 9/10
Title: 16/20
Grammar: 31/35
Content: 25/25
Overall Impact: 9/10
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Total Score: 90/100
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