Memories To Last

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Memories To Last
MattyXXZ
Teen Fiction
Completed

1. Book Cover - I love how aesthetically pleasing the book cover is! I also love the font used... I wish I could make an aesthetically pleasing book cover too... LOL. Great job!

2. Title - I always believe that a meaningful title leads to a great story. I think the title is very significant to the story, I can really feel it, and it's also a teen fiction story so I think it's a sad one. Great job!

3. Grammar - how can you be so good at Filipino? I hope you could teach me some of Filipino grammar lessons (or maybe not, I am still learning Korean. Kamsahapnida, author-ssi...).

4. Contents - okay... This is one of the best narrations I've ever saw... No, this is the best! Tangina (sorry for the swear word), I really like how you narrates it! If I could give you 500/25 for this, I will... You're great, author!

5. Overall Impact - one of the best! I hope this book will be discovered soon!

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Book Cover : 09/10
Title : 18/20
Grammar : 35/35
Contents : 25/25
Overall Impact: 10/10
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Total Score : 97/100

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