The Red Dragon Princess
WrathyySky
Mystery/Thriller
On-going
1. Book Cover - I think the book cover is pretty cool. It matches the title and genre so perfectly. GREAT JOB!
2. Title - okay, first of all, I somehow find it too difficult to critique, like, it's cliche but unique, dull but interesting. The title screams intensified confusion and contradiction. Princess is commonly used, yet Red Dragon Princess? Never heard of it. It's dull as the word princess is really cliche but Red Dragon Princess will pique your interest. It's astonishing but unattractive, and what I like about the title is it matches the book cover! Great job, author.
3. Grammar - I think you really need to study properly and correctly write. How to use spacing, punctuations, capitalizations, spellings, how to write in a way that it's both realistic but at the same time, properly done.
4. Contents - gang-centered stories are cliche already.
5. Overall Impact - overall, my expectations to this story is very disappointing. I thought it's "that" good.
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Book Cover : 08/10
Title : 17/20
Grammar : 18/35
Contents : 15/25
Overall Impact: 05/10
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Total Score : 63/100
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