Noxious
piceusve
Mystery/Thriller
Completed
1. Book Cover — whoah. I was impressed by your book cover! Seriously! One of the best book cover I have ever seen. Simple but astonishing!
2. Title — your title is pretty impressive, not alluring but will attract lots of readers, thou it's effectiveness will only work if and only if your book cover is cool.
3. Grammar — you don't need to improve if you're this good! Good job!
4. Contents — I love your writing style! Very informative and entertaining! The shift of point of views are very astounding! Some people can't pull it off so it was great seeing someone doing that. The characters also have different personalities and it was very realistic, I don't know how did you do that but, great job!
5. Overall Impact — thou with the great reviews I've left, I must say I don't know why it doesn't have a great impact, maybe because their is still no thrill or suspense? Like, the first part should be a suspenseful event but, it lacks of emotion, you somehow overdid the narrations in prelude and forgotten about the emotion thatt made it just a plain event. Still, good job.
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Book Cover : 10/10
Title : 16/20
Grammar : 33/35
Contents : 25/25
Overall Impact: 07/10
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Total Score : 91/100
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