Missing One Person
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Teen Fiction
On-going
1. Book Cover — like I said, I have the tendency to favor simple book covers that do have different meanings. The book cover is too meaningful for me. It's a bass guitar, right?
2. Title — I thought it's a mystery/thriller story. Kasi missing one person tapos siguro hahanapin nila yung taong iyon but like the book cover itself, the title is too meaningful too. Not catchy but once you've read the first and second part, it will catch your whole attention.
3. Grammar — The grammar is super nice. I couldn't believe that most are learning grammar (whether it's English or Filipino) through writing and because of writing. Thou there is still a room for improvement.
4. Contents — the flow of the story, the dialogues, it was all surreal. It is very realistic, not just the dialogues but the thought of the characters too. It was well-written and it makes me crave for more. Good job!
5. Overall Impact — I was astonished by the story. It's a story that you will love. Ang gusto ko sa kwentong ito ay hindi siya masyadong focused on romance (Shuu×Amy) but it is more focused on friendship.
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Book Cover: 10/10
Title: 19/20
Grammar: 31/35
Content: 25/25
Overall Impact: 10/10
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Total Score: 95/100
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