Off Limits

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Off Limits
Huwada
General Fiction
Completed

1. Book Cover —I love the book cover. Seriously, kung sino man ang gumawa nito ay halatang expert na. The book cover speaks for the story too so I am pretty impressed!

2. Title — the title was deeper than I thought. At first, you'll think that the title wasn't that nice but throughout the story, especially in the end, you'll see how meaningful the title is.

3. Grammar — the grammar  was perfectly constructed! Good job, author!

4. Contents —  the flow was perfectly constructed too... The dialogues are very realistic to what are we experiencing right now. Parang hinango siya sa isang totoong kwento. Maikli pero malaman. The way how you describe what's happening in the story by Rica's thought, it was mesmerizing. Thou it's a bit dull in the beginning, as you read the story, you will see how good this story is. If you want a big plot twist, this is the one!

5. Overall Impact — Truthfully, noong una ay parang ayaw ko nang ituloy ang kwento... Dahil nga medyo dull sa una... Pero habang tumatagal, napagtanto kong maganda talaga ang pagkakagawa. Mapapa-AMEN ka na lang. It is a must read.

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Book Cover:        10/10
Title:                     19/20
Grammar:           35/35
Content:               24/25
Overall Impact:   9/10
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Total Score:        97/100

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