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Mystery/Thriller
On-going
1. Book Cover - I really love your book cover! But I knew you could do better than that. :)
2. Title - the title is a bit dull but given the fact that it's a mystery/thriller, I am somehow fascinated. I think this will be a great story.
3. Grammar - if ever you're reading how do I critique the other books, I already said that I really prefer English... Amhina ako sa Filipino even thou it's my native language, but I also reads deep tagalog books like Noli Me Tangere and El Filibusterismo so I was really astonished by your grammar. Great job, author! Sana all magaling sa tagalog. You made my head spin...
4. Contents - not gonna lie, one of the best narrations I ever had. The flows great, the details weren't a bore and instead, very entertaining which made the story's flow really great!
5. Overall Impact - what a great story! Seriously, it's really a great story. Good job, author!
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Book Cover : 08/10
Title : 17/20
Grammar : 35/35
Contents : 25/25
Overall Impact: 10/10
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Total Score : 95/100
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Lay's Critique Shop 2020 (OPEN)
Non-Fiction[CLOSED-ON-GOING] Lay's Critique Shop 2020 WARNING!!! Inconsistent updates, busy si Lay (busy ako), do not call me Author/Miss Author/Miss A. Lay na lang (pronounce it in Filipino pronunciation, hindi Ley, okay? Lay talaga iyan...). H'wag maattitude...
