Losing to Win
mi_michiah
Teen Fiction
On-going
1. Book Cover - I think the book cover is good, but there is still a room for improvement.
2. Title - I find the title really attractive as it wasn't cliche but seems to have different meaning than what it seems. Parang may istorya talaga sa pamagat at gugustuhin mong basahin ang libro para malaman ang istoryang iyon!
3. Grammar - The grammar is all good, it's just that sometimes, typo sucks (it always sucks! And btw, typo is unavoidable, chill,) and somehow, sometimes there are words that not understandable.
4. Contents - I love how the main characters do have the same trait yet for different and complete opposite reasons... Parang in-emphasize nun ang pagkakaparehas nila, at the same time, ang pagkakaiba nila. It moved me, really. Take note, after pa ng note mo sa baba saka ko binasang Ayu yung Aeiou, kasi binasa ko yun as A-e-i-o-u nung umpisa pa lang, at akala ko rin babae siya. LOL.
5. Overall Impact - Overall, its really a great story. You have a future ahead of you.
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Book Cover: 7/10
Title: 18/20
Grammar: 32/35
Content: 23/25
Overall Impact: 8/10
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Total Score: 88/100
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