Lay's Critique Shop 2020 (OPEN)

The Death of Solace

The Death of Solace
gery_anne
Teen Fiction
On-going

1. Book Cover - I love the simplicity of the book cover and the font used for the cover. It's very aesthetic and very pleasing to the eyes. PERFECT SCORE!

2. Title - for me, the title is really alluring and really pleasing yet not attractive. It sounds so pleasing in the ears yet some readers might have a hard time thinking about it or something like that (maybe it's just me, whatever) but I really love it. Good job!

3. Grammar - I love how perfect the grammar is, English or Filipino, it is really great. Hindi ako marunong magSpanish pero, I think it's great. LOL.

4. Contents - I love how Solace and Quillon complements each other. Para silang Yin at Yang. Solace is a nice and kind kind of person but she has an evil side that only Quillon can see, while Quillon is a bad kind of guy that is only good to Solace. Hindi na bago ang ganitong prompt pero yung paraan kasi ng pagkakasulat, yung bawat dialogue, thoughts, actions, lahat ay malinis, maganda, at pulido. Para silang mga totoong tao na inilagay lang ang kwento sa Wattpad. Minsan ay napapairap na lang ako pagnakakarinig ako ng Mafia prompts dahil minsan ay medyo unreal na pero yung way ng pagsulat mo ay realistic. It's making the mood really cool! Yah! Great job, people!

5. Overall Impact - Hindi ko alam kung may maidadagdag pa ko sa sinabi ko sa itaas. It's just that, for me, it's perfect. The flow is not too fast and too slow, which made it better, because it shows the readers (us), before Quillon fell for her because of her screaming pure joy and innocence made it better as it really breaks the stereotype of someone falling in love because they are attractive and such. Damn.

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Book Cover: 10/10
Title: 19/20
Grammar: 35/35
Content: 25/25
Overall Impact: 10/10
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Total Score: 99/100

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