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Fantasy
On-going1. Book Cover - I love the book cover, simple but elegant, but the book cover screams teen fiction...
2. Title - the title is very attractive as I can really feel the significance of the title to the story, but isn't it a bit teen fiction-y or a bit romance-y?
3. Grammar - I really love how you nailed the Filipino Grammar! Seriously! I sucked at Filipino so these envious feelings are really natural. Hehe...
4. Contents - I won't make it longer anymore... The genre doesn't fit the story. I think Historical Fiction or General Fiction fits this story more, hindi fantasy. This story screams more of those two genres than fantasy.
I like how the narrations goes thou.
5. Overall Impact - I'm impressed that you pulled off such majestic story but at the same time, somehow doubtful about the genre you picked.
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Book Cover : 07/10
Title : 15/20
Grammar : 35/35
Contents : 17/25
Overall Impact: 07/10
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Total Score : 81/100
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