To Fall Again
glymerous
Romance
On-going
1. Book Cover — the simplicity of our book cover is very nice. I love how you use a handwriting type of font which makes it very pretty at the same time, not irritating in the eyes.
2. Title — titles like these are really alluring in the eyes and in the ears but it seems like somehow, it contains a cliche plot base on it's title (LOL, almost all plots are taken and written already so I can't really blame you). Good job.
3. Grammar — I like how you play with your words. You write very proper and that makes me really happy. :))
4. Contents — the flow of the story is lit! I love how you show what is happening in the story, I love how you make us, the readers, feel the story. It's illegal that you write this good! Hahahahaha... Great job!
5. Overall Impact — I love the whole story, it didn't disappoint me and it somehow made me rethink why did I think it's cliche? LOL. This is cool thou...
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Book Cover : 10/10
Title : 17/20
Grammar : 35/35
Contents : 25/25
Overall Impact: 10/10
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Total Score : 97/100
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Lay's Critique Shop 2020 (OPEN)
Non-Fiction[CLOSED-ON-GOING] Lay's Critique Shop 2020 WARNING!!! Inconsistent updates, busy si Lay (busy ako), do not call me Author/Miss Author/Miss A. Lay na lang (pronounce it in Filipino pronunciation, hindi Ley, okay? Lay talaga iyan...). H'wag maattitude...
