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Teen Fiction
On-going
1. Book Cover — i like the simplicity of the book cover and I suggest a font change... It wasn't that attractive thou, at least in the digitals.
2. Title — it depends on the book cover if your title will work well, thou it's aesthetically pleasing in the ears, it wasn't that attractive to most.
3. Grammar — your grammar is very nice, thou the blending of English language and Filipino language is a but, bad.
4. Contents — you can feel the good flow of the story, what the character feels, but it lacks more emotions... It's just alright thou, you need to improve it.
5. Overall Impact — it's not that bad but it's not that good either.
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Book Cover : 06/10
Title : 15/20
Grammar : 30/35
Contents : 21/25
Overall Impact: 07/10
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Total Score : 79/100
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Lay's Critique Shop 2020 (OPEN)
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