Apollo Zapata
BlackPhoenixxxx
Teen Fiction
Completed
1. Book Cover — it's good but not great. Improvements are advisable. I think it's emitting the Romance vibes more than TeenFic.
2. Title — The title is somehow, a tricky title. It's good but you need a good book cover to support it.
3. Grammar — after using ellipsis (...) the next word's first letter must be capitalized. I think you have a problem with capitalization (that makes me ick, thou don't mind me, I'm grammar conscious). You have a problem with punctuations too, so I think you must learn how to use punctuations in proper way. :)
4. Contents — the narration is boring, but the dialogues are backing it up! Their expressions was seen in the dialogues, even if it's just a book, that makes up the boring narration. Thou you still need to do your narrations.
5. Overall Impact — it's a great story! The contents are very cool and nice. I think it will be greater if you'll improve it.
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Book Cover : 08/10
Title : 17/20
Grammar : 29/35
Contents : 20/25
Overall Impact: 07/10
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Total Score : 86/100
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