Quick Question

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Hello readers!

I hope you all had a happy holiday! I've been working on Castlevania and I've been thinking about changing a scene in the book.

Specifically instead of having 'Amelia' (aka the protagonist) and Alucard having their first intimacy scene after they admit their love for each other, instead it would happen in 'The Glaring Cloth' when they both return home after their courting flight.

I felt like that happened too fast after they admitted their love and the story would flow better after the courting flight, where she consents it as long as Alucard is okay.

Note that the actual steamy scene won't be shown.

What do you think? Should I switch things around it's good the way it is? Please reply in the comments below.

Thanks for reading! 

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