I really wish I had the time, energy and mindset to rewrite this story...
Every time I want to go back and reread it, I never can because I don't like how it's written...
Maybe it's just me, but I would rewrite that Bill would get Mabel first so that Bill would only have to switch the twins once, and Stan and Ford would have a bigger part in this. Oh, and it would follow the newer episodes better too.
Oh well... maybe I'm wrong and the story's just fine.
But...holy cow! I've got over 32k views on this!!
You readers are amazing and I love you all! You guys keep me from deleting this book and kept me going throughout writing it over the course of those many months. Through the slow updates with feelzy endings and cliffhangers and just...wow you guys are truly a miricle!
YOU ARE READING
Betrayal
FanfictionI made a mistake. They could all be hurt or worse because of me! I'm so sorry. Just...remember who...I was ~ My poor little brother. He doesn't seem himself. I don't know. Maybe I'm just going crazy But...what if... ~ That...thing...is not yo...
