babyboy

*reconstruction (please read)

i know y'all are absolutely tired of me updating this thing but please hear me out and read this whole thing.

i literally wrote this years ago when i was in like grade 6 (i'm in high school now) and now that i'm rereading it im realizing how absolutely awful this was. i think the plot is okay although it's kind of weird, but i seriously hate how it was written. my writing has seriously improved, and i'm thinking since yall like this fanfic so much i'm either going to reconstruct this version or just make a whole new one since y'all really liked this version.

it will have the same plot and the same aspects, just executed differently with the writing style i use now that i think has improved a lot. this whole thing was just cringy and hard to read and i don't connect with the characters at all and it has no real emotion to it.

so let me know what y'all think. reconstruct, start over, or leave it as is.