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Neil open her hair bun and said
Neil - aaj inhe khula rehne do.. he said caressing her hair
Avni know why Neil did this.. because of her backless blouse.. she smile and said ok patidev aur koi farmise
Neil - nahi
Avni - I love you
Neil smile and said her i love you too❣
Later their friends came and all sitting in hall
Riya - wow avu tu kitni beautiful lag rhi hai iss saree me
Avni - thanks rii
Nupur - yes riya is right your face is glowing.. any reason ?
Karan - baby ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai.. why avni face is glowing.. ab inka mini honeymoon jo chal rha hai ghar me.. no family only.. you all know n what I'm trying to say
Avni widen her eyes listening karan words.... Unknowingly she started blushing.. and look down in shyness
Seeing Avni blushy face Ali said
Ali - yaar Neil ye main Kya dekh rha hu..?
All looked at him confused.. avni aslo looked at him confused
Neil - Kya Hua Ali
Ali - Avni aur blush.... Ye magic kab hua ?
haaye meri avni ko sarmana bhi aata hai.. mujhe toh pta hi ni tha
( he said keeping his hand on his heart )
Neil ye toh chamatkar ( magic ) ho gya... avni aur blush kya combination hai..
Hearing Ali words Avni glare Ali and shout his name
Avni - aliiii
Ali - mujhe pta hai avni mera naam Ali hai
Neil looked at avni and see how her face became red due to their friends teaseing session
Neil - accha ab bas karo tmlog meri wifey ko aur tease mat karo.. ( he said and side hugged her )
Avni feel relax hearing his words.. she looked at him smiling...
but what she hear next and what neil did..
she just want to run from there & hide somewhere from these people
Neil - apni wifey ko tease sirf me kar sakta hu.. hai n wifey?? saying this he wink at her and peck her cheek in front of all..
Seeing neil like this their friends started hooting.. .
Avni came out from his hug and run from there and went in kitchen
Neil - Kya yaar tmlog bhi.. ab tmlog ki wajah se punishment mujhe milegi
Ali - accha keh toh aise rha hai.. jaise tune kuch Kiya hi nahi.. ab jaa usse lekar aa warna wo kitchen me hi reh jayegi
Neil - ok me aata hu
Here in kitchen Avni composed herself and remember how they tease her... she closed her eyes and think
Avni ( in mind ) - mr. husband tmhari himat kuch jyada badh gyi hai.. tmhe toh me ab bataungi aur ab apni 5th wish bhul jao.. kabhi puri ni hone wali
Neil came in the kitchen and see her standing.. her back facing him.. he came near her and hugged her from back
she opened her eyes feeling his arms around her... But she pushed him back
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