Constructive Criticism #3

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Hello Lovelies! Firstly I want to deeply apologize for not writing for almost 2 weeks! I caught a very bad cold, but I'm better now and I'm back. So if you noticed up above I made a "character card" for Callum! I made one for Reyelle in the very 1st chapter!They are the main characters so I felt like it was very needed and long overdue! Sorry XD! As always, feel free to comment here. I have a few questions below I would like to ask you guys about the story so far! So please feel free to message me your answer privately or comment them here or next chapter! I also might be inserting Matteo and Amy's character cards in the previous chapters as well! So be on the lookout for those!

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1. Is the story making sense?
2. More spice? Suspense? Mafia related things?
3. What are your thoughts on Ramona Lorenzo-Hernandez? (Fare warning: she does get bitchier)

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