Part 36B

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I FAIL TO UNDERSTAND WHY IS RESPONSE STILL SO POOR. THERE ARE MANY READERS WHO ENCOURAGE ME, TAKE THEIR TIME OUT TO COMMENT GENEROUSLY ON EACH CHAPTER, PRESENT THEIR HONEST REVIEWS AND I THANK THEM FROM BOTTOM OF MY HEART. THEY ARE THE ONES WHO HAVE KEPT ME GOING EVEN AFTER POOR READER RESPONSE IN GENERAL. THEY ARE THE ONES FOR WHOM I STAY UP AT NIGHT AND STILL FEEL SO HAPPY ABOUT IT. REALLY REALLY THANK YOU GUYS.

TO OTHERS I HAVE QUESTIONS TO ASK. HOW MUCH TIME DOES IT TAKE TO VOTE ON A CHAPTER IF YOU LIKED IT OR WRITE A COMMENT/MSG ABOUT YOUR OPINION ON IT? DID I EVER ASK YOU NOT TO CRITICIZE? DO IT IF YOU DIDN'T LIKE. HUNDREDS ADD BOOK TO THEIR READING LISTS BUT DONT VOTE OR COMMENT ON A SINGLE PART! THIS CHAPTER-WISE WRITING IS FOR A REASON AND THAT IS WRITER-READER INTERACTION WHICH I M SORRY TO SAY BUT IS VERY DISAPPOINTING HERE. 

YES, NO ONE TOLD ME TO WRITE A STORY, I STARTED ON MY OWN BUT NOW WITH JOURNEY OF SO MANY CHAPTERS, SPENDING SO MUCH OF MY TIME ON IT(I DONT GET CHAPTERS IN DREAMS AND JUST TYPE THEM OUT), FACING PLAGIARISM AND MANAGING IT ALL WITH MY HARSH PROFESSIONAL LIFE(ESP AFTER COVID 19), I THINK I HAVE RIGHT TO ATLEAST AN OPINION FROM EVERY SINGLE READER. I BELIEVE WATTPAD TO BE A SYMBIOTIC PLATFORM. THERE IS VOTE, COMMENT AND MSG BUTTONS FOR A REASON. USE THEM.

YOU THINK I HAVE LOST IT THEN LET IT BE, I DONT CARE ANYMORE. I HAVE KEPT PATIENCE FOR 47 UPDATES. THANK YOU. LETS CONTINUE THE STORY

NOT PROOFREAD. I typed in hurry, so may have many mistakes. Will correct them tomorrow.

Recap:

Khushi smiled one last time as her face scrunched in deep pain and her eyes closed in eternal sleep. Her hand slipped out from under his. His cheek now cold and wet, with a continuous loud beep echoing in his ears.


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"Khushi...Khushiiiii...Khushieeee", Arnav's impatient whispers and increasing pressure of his grip on her hand broke her sleep. Khushi tried to soothe him but his whimpers didn't decrease. She then shook him, trying to wake him up. It seems he was having a nightmare. It was 1 am in night. Arnav opened his eyes, looked at her and shouted, "KHUSHI!!!!" and dropped his eyes close. Aarav woke up too with the loud sound to find Mumma trying to shake Daddy awake. Terrified Khushi realised he had fainted. Arnav got only little semblance back with water drops and they both set him in a better position. Khushi quickly composed her nervousness, asking Aarav to calm down too. It was not time to panic. Not in position to get off bed swiftly, she indicated Aloo to dial Chachu from Papa's phone and walk to Bua's room, that was nearest. She dialed Arnav's physician from hers, rubbing his hands for warmth as she checked his sugar levels. It came out fine and she informed doctor who was already on his way.

Aloo gathered everyone in room within two minutes. Arnav's BP measured very low and doctor who was on line asked them to feed him salt water or a strong coffee to raise it quick. Arnav got back consciousness after sometime and Doctor checked his vitals injecting him with a dose. With all information, he concluded it was due to shock, probably due to nightmare itself coz his routine tests had been all fine. Everyone got to know about Arnav's fear regarding her delivery and tried to reassure him of no complications. Arnav felt bad for scaring everyone, esp his babies but the ugly dream had been too vivid, almost real, like he wouldn't survive anymore. He heaved a sigh of relief to find her near him, all safe and sound but for how long?

Aarav slept after sometime but other two didn't get even a wink of it, busy in their thoughts. Next morning, Mamaji had a talk with Khushi regarding it as Arnav and Aarav slept some more. Khushi had planned a different solution but Mamaiji's advice seemed, a better and permanent solution for his fears. By DM's grace she never had mental blockade for this one. 

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