THAT WAS PERFECT

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He is smiling, "Are you positive?" he asks, "yes" He presses his lips against hers, and then pulls back slowly and gets down on one knee I hear her breath get caught. He pulls out a ring Monique's eyes get wide. "Monique, will you be mine, forever and always together through everything even a child you took my heart the moment I met you, I love you and I always will, I promise to take care of you and our baby I want to be with you forever you are different and I don't mean the fact that you watch power rangers and adventure time" He says smiling "You are the love of my life, I didn't know what love really was but I found it with you,  will you marry me?" He asks her. I see Monique's bottom lip tremble "Yes, of course" Mo says. I realize I had recorded the entire proposal. I felt a tear roll down my cheek as Zayn pulled Monique into an embrace. Mo was crying as he kissed her. "I love you" Zayn says looking into Monique's eyes.

So this is moving a wee fast and it will slow down soon but not in the next couple chapters. I feel like it might be moving a little too fast. Give me some feed back. Oh and who ships Zo? Yeah that's their ship name I have already talked to Monique about it. And I'll try and make the updates a bit longer cos recently they've been pretty short. And this book is going to be pretty long. So expect a lot more writing! :) xx ChristinahoranSept13

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