~Gold fanfiction 2017 award winner~
~Story #15 in Fantasy in 26-03-2017~
Love story between a cricketer and a girl who visible to his eyes only
Chakor is madly love with Suraj because he is a cricketer... Will she able to get her love?
please...
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In Agra
Suraj comes home finished his jogging….
(Chakor search cloth to wear in suraj’s closet…)
Did you come? She asked him…
What are you doing? Suraj questioned chakor…
Hmmm. Tell me… what is your favorite dress?
Suraj: Why are asking?
Because I’m going to wear it… she said with smirked…
Suraj closes the closet… but Chakor again open it…
I ask you to take me shopping… but you are not doing yet…
so I am going to wear this… (She takes black and white small checked shirt and waves it in her hand)
Suraj snatches it from her hand…
Give it to me… or take me to shopping? She shouted…
Okay… suraj mumbled… What are saying? I can’t hear anything… she asked him…
I said okay…we will go shopping… don't touch my things again....suraj groaned
Chakor thinks herself my plan worked…
After 1 hour
They ride in a bike…
Please go slow… my sun… I am afraid…. She continuously nagging
Suraj stops the bike and tell her… if you don’t stop it we can’t go shopping…we will return to home… suraj warned
Are you going to speak again? He questioned…
Chakor shakes her head in no…
Suraj starts the bike… but chakor closes her eyes… and held his jacket tightly…
suraj sees her through rear mirror and smiles… .... .... .... In shopping mall…it’s fully decorated for Christmas… and New Year…
Chakor saw all that and get excited…
Sun… look at Santa clause… is he not looks cute? She speaks continuously without stop..
But suraj saw only red color…sweet beads appears in his forehead… and held chakor hand…
Chakor look at suraj…and asked what happened? Are you fine? She questioned him..
Shall we move? Suraj stammered…
Chakor nodded… thinks herself what happen to him suddenly…. And follows him… … … They select dress but chakor continuously complaint about dress… (Like I don’t like it… its looks heavy… it’s too thin… I don’t like it color…it’s too costly…)
