Just let me know what you are feeling...
I didn't write how my character felt because I want you have to feel what Suraj or chakor feeling by dialogue... I hope that I made it...
Here is the story
Chakor comes out of wash room wearing the dress which gift by suraj…
How am I looking? Am I looking beautiful? She asked him...
Suraj sighs and warps his arm around her neck....
He tells her in my point of view wearing nice cloths will not make no one beautiful but their attitude make them beautiful….
How can all girls ask same question?
Girls… (she fumes) how many girls are ask you like that? She questioned him
Suraj about to say something… but chakor stops him by showing her hand and tells him don’t tell me… what right do I have to ask you?
That’s right… you don’t any right on me but have responsibility on me…
What responsibility do I have? …
If I am pass out you have to take care me…
I don’t understand what you are saying….
Tell me one thing....I’m asking because of curious…
didn’t you tell any girls that “you are looking beautiful”?Of course I said it… it’s all not from my heart…it’s just are words to make woman happy…
Didn’t you felt any girl “wow… she looks cute and pretty”… asks him again
I felt it…he replies...
Who is it? Is she actress or your girl friend?
She was neither two…hmmm… we can take her as just friend… he tells...
Who is she? Please tell me… Chakor pleaded...
I don’t want to answer your questions… he tells her...
Chakor gets frightened… blows her hair…
suraj thinks himself first time..it’s you I’m thinking beautiful and cute when you are blows your hair…
You are just boring…. Chakor mumbled...
Suraj hears but pretend not to hear because he didn’t want to pick a fight with her…
Do you really have to wear this dress?
Why? Am I looking awkward? Chakor asked...
No… because of red colour…
Chakor ignores him and ask him did you get ready? Shall we go?
Suraj says... I’m talking to you… but you are ignoring me….
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It's Because Of Me(Completed)
Fantasy~Gold fanfiction 2017 award winner~ ~Story #15 in Fantasy in 26-03-2017~ Love story between a cricketer and a girl who visible to his eyes only Chakor is madly love with Suraj because he is a cricketer... Will she able to get her love? please...