Hey I know I dont normally do stuff like this but...Hey guys! Your feedback and stuff has been heard and im strongly thinking about rewriting the start of this story.(by like making it shorter and a bit more impactful)
When I started it kinda seemed like things where just happening and the chapters where WAY to short and crammed way to much in them. I also want to rewrite some character interactions and events I didnt like in particular looking back at them. Im thinking there where a few events and encounters that really..shouldnt have happened at all.
I know alot of people who read now probably didnt read those older chapters cuz theres like....100 something chapters now (that wasnt on purpose XD) soooo tell me in the comments if you would be okay with that.
Also tell me what you guys liked and disliked about the story so far. Be honest. Critque is leads to improvement!
Thank you for your support!
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Warframe:lost cause(Finished)
FanfictionThis story follows an ash and how everything changes in his world from his friends his surroundings and his destiny
