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special chapter, one
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◤ If you haven't noticed, I haven't been updating often. You may think it's because I'm lazy -which i am- but it's actually because I'm lying to myself.

You see, if I don't update, then the story never has to end~! And I don't want it to end because I love these characters too much

catch my drift??

*cries*

Okay okay, let me collect myself. Anyway! In my midst of delaying the end of this story I decided to just post the deleted scenes first~! Yay!

They've been rotting for so long I feel like they need to see the light yk?

[warning they were deleted for a reason! so there's no guarantee that they'll be good]

also really quick before you guys read these I need to explain why they're so "plain or basic"

The way i write this story is honestly odd. Basically most of the dialog comes from random thoughts I have late at night, so they're normally written backwards if that makes sense.

I start with dialog and build off of it to create a scene. after the dialog is done, I'll insert basic actions in brackets to add more emotions or attitude to what each character is saying. then when that's done I'll add more detail.

That being said, some scenes might be detailed and others might not. These deleted scene are exactly that, meaning they were either started and never finished, or written and just taken out. So they WON'T BE ENTIRELY COMPLETE hahah

Anyway~! Hope you guys enjoy~!

There's also a bonus of Hongjoong x Yunho at the end heheh  ◢



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DELETED SCENE | "please put on some clothes"

[the original draft for this chapter wasn't actually related to Yeosang over heating, it was just him being a whiny boyfriend]
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"Do it."

"Nu."
[pout]

"Yeosang."
[says sternly. but after seeing Yeosang's pout, slumps shoulders and groans]

"Nu."
[stomps tiny foot]

"Please."

"If it's not your hoodie, I refuse to wear it."
[crossed arms and looks away]

"That's not even what I'm asking."

"The answer's still nu."

"For God's sake! Just put on the freaking boxers!"
[throws shorts at Yeosang]

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