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And.... The winner for the second prompt challenge is... IVM992! Congratulations! Her amazing entry is called "The Greatest Show In Space." Go check it out if you haven't! Looking forward to see what everyone comes up with in prompt challenge #3.

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Comment Topic: None. This week's spotlight round is to honor our second and newest Champion Reviewer, ariel_paiement1. She was chosen as the winner of all three chapters spotlighted in one round, something that is nearly impossible. Congratulations, Ariel!

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Author: ariel_paiement1

Author: ariel_paiement1

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Book Title: Consumed

Spotlight Chapter: Prologue

Summary: N/A

Author's Note: Hi everyone! I'm really excited about this, and I can't wait to see what you all think. Any advice or feedback is welcome, and grammar or help with word flow is always appreciated. Don't be shy; feel free to rip this apart. That said, I do have some questions I'd like answered.

1. Prologue:
Do you feel that this is best as a prologue, or do you think that it would be better off as an opening scene to chapter 1?

2. Hooks:
What about this gets your attention, if anything? If there's nothing, what can I do to make it better or more of a hook, in your opinion?

3. Characterization:
No, I'm not going to ask if you like the character, though I'll be thrilled if you do. Instead, I want to know if the character's base personality and situation have been communicated clearly. Following along that same track of thought, do you have any suggestions for making this come out more clearly if it isn't clear or isn't quite obvious enough as is?

Genre: Teen Fiction

Rating: PG-13

Winning Comment:

#NBR

I. ELOCUTION

a. Major Grammar Corrections

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