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1. Wife to mistress to wife

Author: diyaadhikary

What I liked about the story:

The plot was the most awesome thing here and I loved Shivaay's care for Anika. The plot had a lot of potential.

What I did not like about the story:

There were abbreviated forms of words like you was written u. I don't find it amusing. Second please try to put the dialogues in inverted commas. Also, don't change from third perspective to first person's perspective.

Please use proper punctuation marks. Consider writing in alternative point of view.

And please consider writing a prologue too.

Overall: A good plot but not proper execution. It was nice too read.

I hope I don't sound rude. I tried to be polite and very honest in this.