Review book [Closed]

14. Possessiveness

Author- ShailajaBan

Well the book was okay. I mean, there are just few parts and they aren't very long so I don't know what to say. You can't expect me to blabber about it.

The thing I did not like about it was that it jumped directly to the main thing. I believe you should let the readers connect with your protagonist. You can't expect them to get connected.

You should never ever jump to the main plot unless it's a short story. Go slow and steady. I mean I should know what Anika's character is, what her life is like not suddenly someone kidnaps her.

So honestly. This was what was wrong with the story.

Also, a error I couldn't help but notice every now and then, it's doesn't not does'nt. The apostrophe is used after n and not s.

So yeah, that's kind of it. I don't know what else to say.... Please respond to it (The author) by voting or commenting. Either is fine. But I prefer comments ;)