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3. And they became one forever

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by sweet_poison99

by sweet_poison99

Author: NarBhiholic

What I liked about the stroy:

Of course I loved the twist in this story and I enjoyed Pinky's OMM. Not to mention,dialouges were on the point.

What I did not like about the story:

I couldn't feel the emotions that were necessary. Try to be more descriptive. It will turn out to be more and more good.

The paragraphs were too long. I recommend writing shorter paragraphs. Please giving paragraph after each dialogue.

Also please consider writing in quotation marks. Please write full names not the first initials of the name.

Overall: It was cute. I liked the whole twist thing. It was a nice plot with messy execution. This story needs a lot of editing.

Sorry if I sounded rude. I try to be very polite and honest. Anyways, I hope this comes in use. And guys I don't read the whole story. Some chapters in the beginning and some chapters that are last updated.

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