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6. Saathiya

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by sweet_poison99

by sweet_poison99

Author: razz03

The storyline was good only it wasn't properly excuted. The chapters were short which I really appreciate. The dialogues were good and almost to the point. Also some descriptions were good.

Please write small paragraphs. It's easier to read that way.

Also when you use question mark, use it only once and not twice.

The dialogues should be in inverted commas. Also, I didn't really understand if you intended to write in first person's perspective or third person's perspective. It was kind of messed up.

Overall: If you try rewriting it, it will turn out to be wonderful.