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2. I gave you my heart

Author: SulaimanSulaio

What I liked about this book:

The story made me go Aww. Also the dialogues were cute.

What I did not like about this book:

I did not see very much hate as the plot suggested but anyways please write the dialogues in quotation marks. I was very confused where the dialogue started and ended. Also please do not write in italic.

Please use punctuation marks properly.

Prefer writing in italic when you are writing a flashback, note or probably a letter. Italic can be used when you are writing in third person's perspective and you want to write their thoughts.

For example- It's only getting messy, I don't know what I'm going to do, thought Shivaay.

Please do not, do not change from third person's perspective to first person's perspective. Either consider writing in alternative point of view or third person's perspective.

Please separate Authors note by mention authors note or A/N. I even prefer reading authors note in bold or italic.

Do write a prologue.

Overall: It was good but it got messy. I suggest you to rewrite the story (Do not change the plot but edit it) It looked first draft. This story needs you to sit down and edit it.

Hope I did not sound too rude. I hope you will take it into consideration. Anyways, do you like the reviews?