8. Kiddopia

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Author: TheSassy_Teenager

OK! This has got to be the cutest story I have come across in a while. Aarav and Adhya are too cute for words and so are there antics.

I don't have much to say about this story since it isn't very long. Coming back, I recommend you to write in past tense when you write in third person's perspective. I think it's better that way.

Also, there are many spelling errors and few grammatical errors here and there but I think I quick editing will do it.

Overall: It's just too cute for words,( I know I have said it before) but yeah you can do a lot better.

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