15. True love never ends

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Author- MQURAISHI-

Well, yeah I liked some scenes. It was a good here and there. It isn't much long. Just 4-5 parts and that too about 500 words long I guess? So I have no idea how to appreciate it even if I want to.

The most big problem and it was kinda annoying too, was that you add emojis. I seriously hate it. I mean you aren't supposed to add these stuff, are you?

Second, please don't add pictures. I mean you can attach banners, that's fine but no pictures in between. If you want the readers to know what the certain person is wearing let them know through words. That's what it is, finding a way through words.

Basic advice:-

• Try writing in inverted commas
•Write full word and not abbreviations
•Check for spelling errors.

That's pretty much it I guess....edit this book. This books begs for an editing.

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