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5. Wifey loves hubby

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przez sweet_poison99

autorstwa @sweet_poison99

Author: Aditi059

I loved the title. The story was cute. I liked the display of Sonakshi's emotions. She's a good character. Also, your story is flowing at a great pace. I don't feel it's rushed.

Well, it would be nice if you don't write the dialogues in italic. Considering, dialogues are very much it is kind of difficult to read. If you want to write inner voice or Sonakshi's thoughts then consider writing in italic.

Also, I recommend you to leave space after each dialogue. For example-

"You are not good" I punched him.

"I know that" he smiled cheekily.

Rather than writing like this-

"You are not good" I punched him.
"I know that" he smiled cheekily.

I'm going to read this story when I'm free. Anyways happy writing :) Hope you are satisfied with the review.