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16. Hidden love

This is going to be quite a long post, I guess? I need to explain a few things.

Author— @entangledwind

The description was very cool. It was short yet nice. That water revenge wasn't anything serious but it was sweet sweet kinda revenge.

This story had good elements, I enjoyed some parts.

I had been so confused at some points in this story.

First of all, please don't add a post as 'characters and relations', OK? Look, when you read a novel, do you know how people know each other, no right? We get to know the character through the story and that's what you need to do. Let the readers know the character through the story.

Please don't add what you think about the situation in between. That's honestly very irritating. We don't want to know what you think about the situation. So please...

The bigger problem. Please don't add photographs. Banners are fine. But please no other photographs. Have you seen novels in which pictures are added?! No right? It's because we want to tell readers through words. Create a atmosphere for them and adding so many pictures breaks the flow. Look if you keep adding pictures then you won't be able to improve. Even though you fan fiction writer, your book (fan fiction) should be worth reading. It should at least feel like a real book.

And please give some paragraph. After each dialogue please give one line space.

The basic things that you need to see while editing are–

• Spelling errors

• Don't change from third person's perspective to first person's perspective.

• Kindly write dialogues in inverted commas