Reviewed by -jolyne-
Author: MaryEllenCampbell
Title: A Night Within A Day
Genre: Random as of this moment
Cover : 3 / 5
It's cluttered , but I like the idea!
Blurb : 3 / 5
Definitely a run - on and you can make it flow better , but I can understand it and it gets the point across.
Title : 5 / 5
It's an interesting title and seems paradoxical! Would surely draw in readers.
Plot : 9 / 10
I like the set - up and everything , but it just seems to be moving a bit too slow for me at first and not much is happening.
Character development : 13 / 15
I know it's just the beginning and not much has happened quite yet , but even so , I feel like we could know more about "Anna Thomas" a lot more in the beginning and right off the bat.
Spelling and grammar : 7 / 10
Just a lot of simple mistakes that I caught i.e. who's v. whose and a bunch of run - ons. Just be careful :)
Overall : 9 / 10
Amazing idea , just could be polished up. I love the idea of a different world and dreams! ( btw I would put this in the genre of fantasy :) )
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