Reviewed by: -jolyne
Author: Fantasies-N-TeaIn20s
Title: One Breath Closer To Death
Genre: Action/Adventure.
Cover : 4 / 5
Neat concept ! The font could be adjusted and the place where your author name is could be adjusted as well.
Blurb : 2 / 5
The first part doesn't really flow well and already there are grammar issues.
Title : 4 / 5
Neat title , but may I suggest "One Breath Closer to Death" in your title line.
Plot : 8 / 10
A bit slow and hard to follow.
character development : 14 / 15
- starts off really strong in the beginning, but it's a bit shaky in the middle
Spelling and grammar : 5 / 10
Awkward transitions are seen and there's a lot of places where it really doesn't flow
Overall : 6 / 10
Honestly . I'd suggest to take off that very first chapter. take any sort of criticism , and be ready for it. It can only help you. and, even if someone says " it sucks, here's why : x, y, and z," it's just a free critique ! and if they're just straight - up haters , just politely comment , hey that's not cool or ignore them
And definitely edit / proofread as you go. It'll only get you more readers that way since no one likes to read an un-edited manuscript.
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